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FINALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLY!!!!!!! crap i had some major frustrations with this page!! first, i should have put another panel inbetween panels 1 & 2 it looks choppy T.T and to top it off when i inked this (FOREVER ago) i was mad so i kept messing things up. like panel 5 and panel 6.... anyway hope ya enjoy! ^_^ hope to other inked ones up soon! CC&C WOULD BE AMAZING!!! C: thankz! Cover Page -->[link] Page 001 -->[link] Page 002 -->[link] Page 003--> [link] Page 004 -->[link] Page 005 --> [link] Page 006 --> [link] Page 007 --> [link] Page 009 --> [link] Page 010--> [link] everything OP related (C) Oda-sensei enjoy! ^^ |
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lol yeah he's trying to cheer him up but i don't think it will work too well
Okay, there are some improvements in your comic style since the last page. The first panel is great, and I concur about the choppiness. The second panel....Zoro and Sanji were standing on an elevated platform, right? Because Luffy looks shorter standing behind a crouching Zoro. Third panel looks okay, maybe show the hands slapping down as well....is Nami wearing a Moomoo? Panel four could use a different perspective. Sanji looks like he's...kneeling before Zoro or something. Panel five looks good, though the mouths are shaped kind of odd. Maybe curl the mouth at the bottom so it makes a more circular shape. Now the last panel...maybe try a more level perspective for a group shot like this instead of a bird's-eye view, that way you can see Franky.
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